Narcissus Calls Off The Engagement

Starbucks cup ”You mean,” she gasped, with almost too much theatrical flourish, ”after all we’ve been through, after all the shit we’ve been through together, you want to just end it? Like that?”

It was a peculiarly hot day in L.A. for March, the sun beating down on the patio of the Starbucks with the heat of a million suns. Narcissus smirked and raised his Ray-Bans so she could see his piercing blue eyes.

“Babe,” he said in the throaty growl he used to both intimidate and seduce, “obviously this relationship meant more to you than it did to me.”

5 Responses to “Narcissus Calls Off The Engagement”

  1. Zel-kun Says:

    For some reason, I envision the guy to be Jack Nicholson.

  2. Julie Scott Says:

    I envisioned Val Kilmer… but a young Jack Nicholson works, too.

  3. Laura Says:

    I’m enjoying the longer pieces very much - but the short ones are great, too. This one in particular.

  4. Rodger Jacobs Says:

    Hey, Laura. Good seeing you ’round these parts.

  5. Laura Says:

    I read faithfully in RSS and am always happy to see that there’s a new post available. I don’t always click through to read comments; I suppose I should more often.

    And happy Valentine’s Day to you!

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