Bitterfruit Stairs

cracked asphaltA city scene. A cracked asphalt staircase with no hand railing hugs the western portion of a paved urban hillside, a stretch of road that leads to a tree-lined street above. What is supporting the staircase, with brown and green weeds flourishing in its cracks and fissures, is uncertain because the object cannot be seen.

At the foot of the city hillside, paused in mid-stroll in a pedestrian intersection that is all hers to occupy, is a young girl with soft brown hair in pigtails. She wears a black-and-white plaid skirt and a simple white blouse. The hem of one sleeve is being lightly lifted by a breeze. Her small feet, almost child-like, are tucked into ankle-length socks and a pair of Buster Browns. Her face is turned from us as she contemplates the long, decaying sidewalk that traverses the hill.

The road at the top of the hill where the staircase ends — or begins, if one is descending the hill — is devoid of any life whatsoever. No cars. No pedestrians. Dark brown trees sprout pale yellow lemons the size of basketballs, the boughs of the branches bent and prepared to break. In this grove of brooding lemon trees sits the haunted remains of a child’s lemonade stand, complete with hand-lettered sign and a glass pitcher on the counter that has been sealed over with opaque cobwebs.

This is the picture that Melanie painted in her mind’s eye when the doctor told her that the lump in her breast was malignant.

10 Responses to “Bitterfruit Stairs”

  1. John Shannon Says:

    Ouch.

  2. Rodger Jacobs Says:

    Yeah, there’s a bit of a bite there, John. Sorry if it snuck up on you.

  3. Scot Says:

    not much to say here–left a bit speechless–good writing as usual.

  4. Kitty Says:

    “Bitterfruit” had me thinking of Billie Holliday singing “Strange Fruit” — until that last sentence, that is.

    What was your inspiration to write this?

  5. Zel-kun Says:

    A surprising ending as always…

    Though not the good kind of surprise…

    As John said, ouch.

    Hope that’s not inspired by real life, Rodger.

  6. Julie Scott Says:

    That was painful, but in a beautiful way.

  7. Rodger Jacobs Says:

    Kitty, the title was the inspiration. I came up with those two words first and then created the text around them. The inspiration for the image was derived from San Francisco’s hazardous Peter Macchiarini Steps, which I walked past every day, many times daily, during my one-year stint in North Beach.

  8. Rodger Jacobs Says:

    Scot, Zel, Julie …

    … thanks as always for reading. I wanted to add a new title to the Artist Tales queue and I think this one works nicely.

  9. Scot Says:

    great title!

  10. Rodger Jacobs Says:

    Thank you ever so, Scot.

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